I almost hurl my Kindle across the box-like room I am sitting in.
The simile spills unnecessarily from my fingers, desperately striving to sound like classic literature, but actually sounding like the spinster-like gushings of Mary from Corrie.
I am stood on a motorway bridge, at a gigantic pile-up taking place in slow motion.
I have momentarily taken on the guise of J G Ballard describing a road accident.
The comparison is being used to illustrate how I rapidly began to feel while reading Fifty Shades of Grey.
I am watching a hideous pile of steel, rubber, chrome, blood, bone and flesh being created before me.
Yet I have not been able to stop experiencing the spectacle.
Until now.
I audibly gasp.
Is there honestly any other way? Ah hang on…
I tried visually gasping – mixing up the senses a bit, but I just looked like a fucking goldfish.
I tried to gasp olfactorially* – nearly causing myself a serious injury, I might add.
*Olfactorially – adverb. “To do something that you can smell”
Okay, okay, the word doesn’t exist I’ll admit – but if it did, it would be spelled that way. It would be the adverb of “olfactory”. As visually is to visual, audibly is to audible, olfactorially is to olfactory.
Hey, at least I’m making up new words instead of flogging old ones to death!! Ha!
I am struggling to deliberately make some of the terrible writing mistakes I have read in the book, but it is very, very difficult.
It is the reading equivalent of listening to Les Dawson playing the piano.
Where would we be without good writing?
Fifty Shades.
And yet it’s the top-selling Kindle book.
Congratulations, you have motivated me to try to write better.